Guess what?
I won Find the Mistake, Round One at
grammarpolice! *squee* The prize?
Find a similarly butchered entry for Round Two. This is where I need some help. It needs to be publicly accessible, and no Netspeak (so the stereotypical Myspace page is out). Just some really badly butchered English. I have 48 hours to submit an entry.
Now for some writing.

Find a similarly butchered entry for Round Two. This is where I need some help. It needs to be publicly accessible, and no Netspeak (so the stereotypical Myspace page is out). Just some really badly butchered English. I have 48 hours to submit an entry.
Now for some writing.